Writing Task: You are required to write a story by using the connectives that you have learnt in Unit 5 (reference: Grammar book Unit 10). You should at least make use of five different connectives to write a short story in about 80-100 words.
Deadline: 11th March 2010 before 5pm
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Last sunday,Dennis forgot to bring some money when he went to the cinema.Therefore,he very upset and went to the library.He found a boy was crying.Moreover,he was calling mother loudly.
Dennis asked him where he mother was?The boy said that he didn't know where was mother going.Therefore,Dennis went to the police station also the boy's mother found her son as well.As a result Dennis felt very happy to help the boy.
However,Dennis mother condemned him wnet back home later.
The End
By Marco Ng (26) 3D
Jun 3D (23)
Yesterday,Marco play computer games with Dennis.However they still didn't finish their homework.Moerover they didn't revise the exam today.Even though I call them didn't play comtuper games.Nevertheless,they didn't listen to me.As a result,they get lower mark in the exam.Furthermore they had scold by their parent.
Jun 3D (23)
Last month,Marco played computer games with Dennis.However they didn't finish their homework.Moreover they didn't revise the exam today.Even though I asked them not to play comtuper games.Nevertheless,they didn't listen to me.As a result,they got lower marks in the exam.Furthermore they was scolded by their parents.
Once upon a time,a girl called kathy.She was a orphan.She lived in orphanage.She was happy everyday.She went to school,played games,shopping and so on,all with her friends.However,this common life was brevity.
One day,the rich couple adopted kathy.Although,the couple were rich.Nevertheless,Kathy felt very unhappy.She wasn't have free.The couple were not to give approval her to play with her poor friends.She could play with rich friends only.Furthermore,she must to read in a rich school.She always cried.Therefore,Kathy told to orphanage president.The president thought idea to help her.The president give more money to the rich couple,president told them,she wanted to adopt Kathy.The rich couple immediated comply.Finally,Kathy regained her common life.
Chelsea sung 3D(12)
Everyday, Marco plays tricks on his classmates. As a result, many classmates abominate Marco. One day, Marco had a big trouble. He did not have enough tissues when he was going to toilet. He asked his classmates:"Can you give me some tissues, please?" However, his classmates did not want to help him. Therefore, Marco stayed in the toilet from 9am to 5pm. He prayed that someone could help him. He hoped god would help him. However, nobody helped him. He cried very loudly. Nevertheless, nobody wanted to help him. Moreover, his classmates laughed at him. At 5pm, he could not wait anymore in the toilet. He did not wait for the tissue and came out from the toilet.
By Dennis Choy 3D (18)
Last monday,Marco called me when i was sleep.He told me he had a terror dream.I asked him what the dresm was.He said he saw a monster wanted to kill him,he was very scared.However,i was very happy.Moreover,he saw a baby looked like Dennis in the mirror.However,i thought he was infantile.Moreover,he saw he was very handsome in another mirror.He said he looked like a prince who was ride a house.However,i thought he was a silly boy.Suddnely
,he screeched.He told me he saw a worm on his bed.
By Kenneth Ngan (28) 3D
harry 3D(20)
One day ,Peter forgot to bring the english book.Therefore,he wanted to borrow other class english book.I said you cannot borrow the english book but he not listen to me so he gave the teacher pinish moreover to stay after school.After
this happen he feel very upset.
Therefore he not borrow english book.However he borrow chinese book because he borrow other leeson book two times moreover he give his mun pinish and cannoy play the computer game.
Last sunday,i saw a man wear a black T-shirt and have scar on his arm in the stree.HE went in a house and i hear some gun sound.However there seem no one hear it.Therefore i went to the house with a afraid feeling.
However there were noone here,suddenly the door was close and all the lights were turn off,moreover the light turn on again,just like have ghost!
When i was afraid,i here some voice,'get up,get up!'i open my eyes and i saw my mother.And i know that i just have a dream,as a result i want to school.
3D 33(Peter YAU)
Tom is good at playing basketball.Furthermore,he is tall.However he is very arrogant.As a result,he thinks he is better than everyone else.As a result, his classmates do not like Tom.Moreover,his classmates do not play with him.As a result,he do not like it.Moreover,he improve his arrogant.After his classmates forgive him.Moreover,his classmates play with him.
Andy Shek(29)3D
Last sunday , a girl called Christine,she went to cinema with her boyfriend.Then,she and her boyfriend was argued by what they want to watch.Then they went to see a scared movie.Christine was scared so she was hugged her boyfriend.After they finished the movie,they was hungry.So they go to eat dinner.When they were having dinner,the waiter was so impolite to them.They was angry with the waiter.
At last ,they gone back home,and having a bad mood.
By 3D Chole (09)
Cherry is selfish,insincere and a stubborn girl moreover she always plat tricks with her friends.Therefore no one like her. Meanwhile,her friends estranged her.As a result she always feel lonely.One day,her teacher Miss Wong tell her about her problems.Therefore she changed her personality and become approachable girl.So her classmates like her very much now.
Kelly Wong 3D(14)
Last Saturday,I went to a camp with my scout's friend.I got a lot of fun in there!However i could not in a group with my best friend.She was in another group!Moreover,I could not sleep in a same camp too!I felt very sad.We played a lot of game.We had a lot of competion.As a result,we won all the competion!We felt very happy!At night,it was rainning.Therefore,we could not play in outside.Furthermore,I forgot to bring my umbralla.On Sunday morning,it was sunny day.I felt i was very lucky!I got a lot fun in this camp!
The End.
Virginia Poon 3D (11)
Mary and Sally are good friends. Moreover, they are neighbour. Even though Sally is selfish, Mary also love playing with her. One day, they went to watch film together. Sally was late for an hour. Mary was very angry. However, Sally did not say sorry to her. Furthermore, she wanted Mary to buy a ticket for her. As a result, Mary did not want to be friend with Sally.
The End.
Susanna Ho 3D(5)
Ally is a primary six student.She usually goes to school by schoolbus.
However,she was late today and missed the schoolbus when she arrived the bus stop.Therefore,she walked to bus no.613 bus stop quickkly.Suddently,a bicycle passed by and she was knock down by it.She fell onto the ground,her school bag was opened and some books were on the road.Moreover,her feet was hurt.Furthermore,she missed a no.613 bus for school.
As a result,she was late for one hour by the time she arrived school.
3D Lilian Fu Cheuk Kwan (04)
Wing 3D(2)
One day, a girl called Yuki. She is a selfish and stupid girl. Therefore, no one wanted to play with her. Furthermore, she did not know herself problems. Up to one night, she was dreamed. Suddenly, had a man to tell her must be generous. And when you did not understand, you ought to ask your teacher. Therefore, Yuki was changed very hard. Meanwhile, she had some friends started to play with her and her result of study was be good. Moreover, she was not a selfish and stupid girl.
Lam wui man(19)3d
Dennis is rich but he is selfish.As a result, Marco is so envyhim.One day,Dennis noctioned that he lost $100 when he was gooning to school.He thought where he had been acrossed before.'Home,forest,Andy's home.....a street.'However, he went back to all the place except Marco's home and his home.He thought his money should stolen by Marco so he called police.
Therefore,Marco was cauhght.The police find the $100 at Marco's home but Marco said the $100 was given by kenneth for his wook.As a result,kenneth sais that he only give Marco $2.Moreover,Marco was stole $50 form him.Therefore, Marco got in to prison forever.
2.Lam wui man(19)3d
Dennis is rich but he is selfish.As a result, Marco is so envy him.One day,Dennis noctioned that he lost $100 when he was gooning to school.He thought where he had been acrossed before.'Home,forest,Andy's home.....a street.'However, he went back to all the place except Marco's home and his home.He thought his money should stolen by Marco so he called police.
Therefore,Marco was cauhght.The police found the $100 at Marco's home but Marco said the $100 was given by kenneth for his wook.As a result,kenneth sais that he only give Marco $2.Moreover,Marco was stole $50 form him.Therefore, Marco got in to prison forever.
Pamela Lam 07 (3D)
Last Sunday,I watch a film with my family.I very love this film. However,my father was sleeping while the film broadcasting.As a result,he think that he was pay money to the cinema to sleep.Nevertheless,except for father think the film was boring,mum ,brother and I think that the film was so entertaining and funny.
3D01 tobey
Once upon a time,there has a boy called Abby,who lives in ABC village alone.He likes to do foolish things.For example,he wants to use many plastic bags to collect all of the air in the world,etc.As a result,people think he is crazy.However,he do not mind that.Moreover,he feels free himself too.Although he do not have any friends,he is not feels boring.In that meantime,he will think he is the most leisure's person in the world.Therefore,do you think Abby is a crazy man?If I need to answer this question,I think I will say 'YES'!!! :)
last sunday,tom play game to 5:00a.m.However,he didn't sleep.Therefore he sleep in English
lesson.Miss Wong punish him to stand out to the classroom.Moreover he still sleep.However he
dream he is a rich man and get much money.As a result,he say he was a much money in the world
and many students hear his say what.Therefore,Ather school Miss Wong see his mother.
3D (27) Ng Kwan Yip
wo ka lok 3D 32
one day,i went to school with my friend,he said:can you lend me 20 dollars?? As a result,i lose 500 dollars,moreover i didn't have so much money,however i lend him 20 dollars.This is my lunch money,therefore,i diden't eat my lunch,however,i also felt happy,thereforehe can give the money back on time.
Martin 3D 21
Last Friday, I went to swimming with my friends because l have waited for this day for some time. However, l didn't bring my swimming trunk. As a result. I used my brief to swim. Therefore, a lot of people looked at me.As a result, l didn't mind that. And l will remember this day forever......
A girl call katy,she has no friends.Therefore,she is a lonely girl.She is very sad.Moreover,she is very envy her classmates why they have friend.However,she is a polite girl.But nobody talking with her and eating lunch with her.As a result,she doesn't like to go to school.Her mother is very worry about katy.Therefore,she ask katy to join some extracurricular activity and make some friends.
NG SIUFAN 3D(10)
Last Monday,Peter and Kase make an appointment to play a strategy online game. However,Peter need to go out with his mun.Therefore,he told Kase he can can`t play him that day.Nevertheless,Kase was angry .Moerover,Kase don`t want to talk with Peter so he hang up on Peter.As a result Kase was angry so Peter call him back and hope Kase would apologizeto him.Howerer,Kase just say hope him don`t mind he was just play tricks on you ...=v=
Than Peter say nothing.- -"
The End
By Mr.Kase,li(25)3D
XDD
WONG SUM YEE 3D (15)
Chuck is handsome boy.There's are lots of girl are pursuit to him.However,he has a girl friend ,Blair.Moreover,Blair know Chuck is popular.As a result, Blair always stay together with Chuck.However Chuck don't like she monitoring his life.As a result,He
tell her don't discontented to him.Furthermore,try to believe him.
Nevertheless,Blair like to be a queen,she can't accepte what she doesn't like,so she keep to stay with Chuck.Meanwhile,Chuck feel
discouraged to Blair.So,He breakup with Blair.Love is a funny game.if you think it is.The one person always win.That always be Chuck moreover he not are goodguy
and he is difficult to appraise.
That 's the charms he is
EMILY YAN(16)
Last week,I planed to swim with my friend.However,i forgot to bring my swim suit.As a result,we didn't go to swim.Although we felt disappointed,but my friend didn't blame me.So we went to eat some food.However,i didn't have enough
money.Therefore,i only looked my friend ate.
Baby 3D (30)
I am a boy.Also,my father is male.However,my mother is female.As a result,I think what is very interesting make me happy.In the meantime,i think i enjoy the family relationship.As a result,i never feel lonely.Moreover,i have more friends.However,my friends are male only.As a result,i want to make friends with girls.As a result,my Mum buy a dog for me what is female.
Raymond 3d (24)
Ball is a ball.Moreover,there are difference shape of ball.Some ball is globe shape.As a result,these globe shape ball can roll over to anywhere.Some ball is globe shape.However,Some ball is not globe shape.The smaller ball can't use foot or hand to play.Theredore,we need to use rocket to hit the ball.There are lots of ball in the world.Nevertheless,i don't know all of the ball.I want to know more ball.
Rachel (6)
once upond a time,there were a young oy called Edmond live in a small village called Eragon in Spain with her beautiful mother.Unfortunately,when Edmond was fifteen,his mother was murdered by the government.It was because his mother knew a top secerct of the government.Thererfore he left his country and go to England to learn magic to killed the government.
Times go fast,Edmond graduated from the magic school.However,he moved on.Although he still hated the government but he remembered that her mum had told him never killed people so he give up.However,he used magic to play tricks on the government for every moment.Also,the spell was really crazy!!!
And now,the government of Eragon still get bad luck!
fanny wo (13)
sorry miss.Late to you=[
One day ,Ben and Ken love a girl .however the girl do not love them.Moreover,the girl love the other boy(peter).As a result ,the girl with Peter together. Nevertheless,Peter do not love him.Therefore,they also disappointed in love .
fanny wo (13)
sorry miss.Late to you=[
One day ,Ben and Ken love a girl .however the girl do not love them.Moreover,the girl love the other boy(peter).As a result ,the girl with Peter together. Nevertheless,Peter do not love him.Therefore,they also disappointed in love .
This story means don't just fine than analogous together furthermore we should mind
mature talent with somebody together.
Lau Hoi Tung, Mandy F.3D (8)
One day, one girl date her friends.However, some of them are forget this matter. Moreover, their moblephone cant't to get though. Therefore, they are go away and haven't to waitting them. Nevertheless, the girl is late to go to their appointment plane, also her moblephone haven't any battery. At a result, she con't to establish every one.At the end, she go home to call her friend and tell them why she late.
or sam is a clever boy .even though he is clever the always tell lies .moreover many teacher love him one day sam forgot to bring his book however he did not tell his english teacher furthermore he borrowed the book by oyher class as a result .teacher know it and punished him
by joncthan
or sam is a clever boy .even though he is clever the always tell lies .moreover many teacher love him one day sam forgot to bring his book however he did not tell his english teacher furthermore he borrowed the book by oyher class as a result .teacher know it and punished him
by jonathan
3d 31
cheung wing yan 3D(03)
Lastday,Max wanted shopping with his friends.Therefore,he asked his mother to take money.Aa a resuit,his mother said can't to him.Moreover,his should study at home.Therefore,Max told his friend his cannot join them.Nevertheless,his friend felt bored and unhappy.However,they know children must listening to their mother.As a result ,they chose to stay at home study together.Moreover,they mother both felt happy!As a result,their mother approval they can go to shopping next weekend together !
Yesterday,I want to play volleyball with Jonathan.Michael and Marco after school.However,it was rain.As a result,we went to canteen and ate something.We told a lot of dirty gag.When the rain stop,we went to home.
3D(17)
Yesterday,I want to play volleyball with Jonathan.Michael and Marco after school.Then we went to the volleyball ground to play volleyball.We were very happy ang warm.However,it was rain.As a result,we went to canteen and ate something as it's so cold.We told a lot of dirty gag.All of us laugh loudly.We also played some interesting gameS.When the rain stop,we went to home.
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