Topic: An interesting story about animals helping people
Number of Words: 50-70 words (please count the number of words you have written)
Deadline: 25th May, 2010
Remember to give your NAME and CLASS NUMBER.
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Amy 3B(4) When I was in primary 6, I visited a elderly woman, and she had a small dog. As the woman moved not very well, she cannot do things easily. And the dog always help her to take somethings and it always play with the woman, the woman said that her dog bring her a hope and happiness. Although it just a small story, but I still remember this experience now. (70 words)
My friend have a dog. It is so cute and small!! It can do so many thing like swimming or play with people or help people!!It play with me too! I like this dog very much but it is not mine! I will not forget it!
One day ,John played football with his friend.Suddenly,his friend fall down . He was Surprise that he feel his friend was dead.Then,he was cry. After a long,his friend Awake.John was happy.Formerly,his friend only was very tired to fall down. (51 word) Dickson Ng(28)
A pet, whether a cat or a dog. it is not only our pets. It’s our friends! I have remember that I have been take care a cat before. The cat is a nicely cat, every time I have meet her, she like to climb and sleep on my leg. That fluffy makes me feel so Itchy, it makes me have a big laugh! It makes know how to take care an animal and having an animals can make you more relax!
One day,Mary played with dog. Suddenly,her dog fall down. She was Surprise that She feel her dog was dead. Then,She was cry. After a long,her dog Awake.Mary was happy.Formerly,her dog only was very tired to fall down. Dickson Ng(28) (51words)
Many people like playing with dog. I have one friend,her dog is very excited and lovable.Her dog can walk with two foot one minute,the dog also can give many people big hand,so I think so funny,I am very like the dog because the dog is very interesting. 3b(20) CHU KIN HO
Felix Cheung 3B(18) When I was 10,and I saw a dog lie near a blind man.And there have a rope connect blind man and the dog.But the rope broke,and the blind man get lost after he lost the dog,and he find police to help him back home and find the dog.In dusk,the dog found out of the blind man home.
3B 30 Two years ago, my father bought me a dog.His name is Bobi. It is so cute and sporty. It like playing ball games. One day I helped it to take a bath.Suddenly,it shaked its body, it made me my body so wet.
3B 30 Two years ago, my father bought me a dog.His name is Bobi. It is so cute and sporty. It like playing ball games. One day I helped it to take a bath.Suddenly,it shaked its body, it made me my body so wet.
Ping (2)3B Animal is help each other organisms, such as humans and dogs. Everyone knows that dogs can help people a lot of things. Once, a man's home on fire, but because his family is very far away from urban areas, Therefore, it is difficult for ambulance rescue scene, but his pet - dog, Ambulance personnel to rescue him as soon as possible, so that it led the ambulance crew arrived home. Finally the man could save lives.
I would like to talk about an amazing case. One day , Ken and his family were sleeping at home. As they were sleeping , they didnt know there was a fire. The reason why was that Ken played matches at home and he didnt pack things in order.And then the matches started to burn , but they didnt know. The fire spread rapidly. Luckily , they have a bigger house and a farm. In addition , there were some pigs and the pigs were very clever. They went into the house and prevent the fire to spread by using some water. Finally , the pigs saved the whole family. They were very surprised that the pigs saved them and they wanted to thank these pigs.
Grace 3B(10) I watched a TV program, in that TV program there had a parrot. Its master was an old woman, that woman forgot her address most of time. Although the old woman always forgot her address, the parrot could remember it. When the old woman lost and forgot the address, the parrot will read aloud the address and repeat and repeat. (60 words)
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Amy 3B(4)
When I was in primary 6, I visited
a elderly woman, and she had a small dog. As the woman moved not very well, she cannot do things easily. And the dog always help her to take somethings and it always play with the woman, the woman said that her dog bring her a hope and happiness. Although it just a small story, but I still remember this experience now.
(70 words)
My friend have a dog. It is so cute and small!! It can do so many thing like swimming or play with people or help people!!It play with me too! I like this dog very much but it is not mine! I will not forget it!
Chester Lam(24)
(49words)
One day ,John played football with his friend.Suddenly,his friend fall down . He was Surprise that he feel
his friend was dead.Then,he was cry.
After a long,his friend Awake.John was happy.Formerly,his friend only was very tired to fall down.
(51 word)
Dickson Ng(28)
A pet, whether a cat or a dog. it is not only our pets. It’s our friends! I have remember that I have been take care a cat before. The cat is a nicely
cat, every time I have meet her, she like to climb and sleep on my leg. That fluffy makes me feel so Itchy, it makes me have a big laugh! It makes know how to take care an animal and having an animals can make you more relax!
Mandy Ng (6)
(82 words)
One day,Mary played with dog. Suddenly,her dog fall down. She was Surprise that She feel her dog was dead. Then,She was cry. After a long,her dog Awake.Mary was
happy.Formerly,her dog only was very tired to fall down.
Dickson Ng(28)
(51words)
Many people like playing with dog.
I have one friend,her dog is very excited and lovable.Her dog can walk with two foot one minute,the dog also can give many people big hand,so I think so funny,I am very like the dog because the dog is very interesting.
3b(20)
CHU KIN HO
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Felix Cheung 3B(18)
When I was 10,and I saw a dog lie near a blind man.And there have a rope connect blind man and the dog.But the rope broke,and the blind man get lost after he lost the dog,and he find police to help him back home and find the dog.In dusk,the dog found out of the blind man home.
(61 words)
3B 30
Two years ago, my father bought me a dog.His name is Bobi. It is so cute and sporty. It like playing ball games. One day I helped it to take a bath.Suddenly,it shaked its body, it made me my body so wet.
3B 30
Two years ago, my father bought me a dog.His name is Bobi. It is so cute and sporty. It like playing ball games. One day I helped it to take a bath.Suddenly,it shaked its body, it made me my body so wet.
Ping (2)3B
Animal is help each other organisms, such as humans and dogs.
Everyone knows that dogs can help people a lot of things.
Once, a man's home on fire, but because his family is very far away from urban areas,
Therefore, it is difficult for ambulance rescue scene, but his pet - dog,
Ambulance personnel to rescue him as soon as possible, so that it led the ambulance crew arrived home.
Finally the man could save lives.
I would like to talk about an amazing case. One day , Ken and his family were sleeping at home. As they were sleeping , they didnt know there was a fire. The reason why was that Ken played matches at home and he didnt pack things in order.And then the matches started to burn , but they didnt know. The fire spread rapidly. Luckily , they have a bigger house and a farm. In addition , there were some pigs and the pigs were very clever. They went into the house and prevent the fire to spread by using some water. Finally , the pigs saved the whole family. They were very surprised that the pigs saved them and they wanted to thank these pigs.
3B08 kathy
One day,i and my friends went out for lunch,when we were go back to school.
Suddenly,a friend said 'see have a bug on my hand'The bug was green,big and long,as same as a small banana.
Then,we arrived school and ready to back classroom.He said excitied'i have a fun idea for our classmates!'
I didn't knew what he will do.
When he came back,he said 'look at my hand!'The bug still on his hand,
he said 'It is a trick for classmates'
One day,i and my friends went out for lunch,when we were go back to school.
Suddenly,a friend said 'see have a bug on my hand'The bug was green,big and long,as same as a small banana.
Then,we arrived school and ready to back classroom.He said excitied'i have a fun idea for our classmates!'
I didn't knew what he will do.
When he came back,he said 'look at my hand!'The bug still on his hand,
he said 'It is a trick for classmates' (81words)
Chris Tsang3B32
Grace 3B(10)
I watched a TV program, in that TV program there had a parrot. Its master was an old woman, that woman forgot her address most of time. Although the old woman always forgot her address, the parrot could remember it. When the old woman lost and forgot the address, the parrot will read aloud the address and repeat and repeat.
(60 words)
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