Topic: An interesting story about animals helping people
Number of Words: 50-70 words (please count the number of words you have written)
Deadline: 25th May, 2010
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One day, when Peter went to the forest, he was attacked by the lion. He was got aggravated assault. He cried, he shouted, but no one responsed. Fortunately, one of the pig was arrived there. So finally, Peter was treveled the pig to go back home. He got rescue! (49words) Lee Yeuk Pan, Joe 3E(28)
John was swimming in the sea on sunday.He was learning how the swim.However,he had no power,so he was drowning.A dolphin was swam to him.I carried him on back and swam to shore.People saw this situation,they called police and rescue John.Finally,the dolphin swam away. (53words) Tang Lai Hang 3E(16)
Elena had a very wonderful family. Her parents were not strict with her. She felt happy all the time until that accident happened. One day, Elena was sick. She got a big fever. The fever lasted for a month. When Elena recovered, she found out that she can’t see anything. The doctor said that was because the fever lasted too long, it cost her blind. Elena was very unhappy and frustrated. She felt there was no reason for her to stay in the world. She wanted to suicide. Fortunately, her parents stopped her. Elena’s parents bought her a guide dog. Elena didn’t like the dog at first. But finally they became friends and treated each other friendly. Elena also gave the dog a name called sweetie because she thought sweetie was so important and sweet to her. Amanda Ng F.3E (14)
Elena had a very wonderful family. Her parents were not strict with her. She felt happy all the time until that accident happened. One day, Elena was sick. She got a big fever. The fever lasted for a month. When Elena recovered, she found out that she can’t see anything. The doctor said that was because the fever lasted too long, it cost her blind. Elena was very unhappy and frustrated. She felt there was no reason for her to stay in the world. She wanted to suicide. Fortunately, her parents stopped her. Elena’s parents bought her a guide dog. Elena didn’t like the dog at first. But finally they became friends and treated each other friendly. Elena also gave the dog a name called sweetie because she thought sweetie was so important and sweet to her. (137 words) Amanda Ng F.3E (14)
Ivan was left behind at the desert island. He could not find any food in the island so he just could fish in the sea. When he was fishing, there was a bird hovering in the sky, it saw everything Ivan did. The clever bird knew that Ivan wanted to survive so it wanted to help him. The bird found some food in the woods on the island then brought them to Ivan. In the meantime, Ivan had a rest at the beach nearby. The bird stood in front of Ivan and put the food down, signaled that the food was for him. He felt surprise but also helpless. The food which was brought by the bird was worms. (106 words) Hazel Wan 3E (18)
One day, Jon walked alone the forest. His house was behind the forest. Suddenly, a group of wolves were appeared. Jon was ran away, but the wolves were very fast. When he was attacked by the wolves. Fortunate, the king of the forest 'King Kong' came to rescue Jon. Why the King Kong would protect human? Becuase Jon was King Kong's friend. 62words Alvin Hong 3E(26)
Once upon a time,had a beautiful girl who lived in castle.Her name called Ann.She was felt very bored in castle.Therefore, she was ran out from the castle. When she walked along in the street,Ann met a boy.He was so handsome and called Jonthan.He asked Ann'What your name?'Ann said'My name is Ann.''What? you call end?'Jonthan said.'No,is A..n..n,Ann!'she said.'Oh,sorry.'Jonthan said.Then,they made a good friend.They every day would went out to shopping and painic,were very happy. One day,when they had lunch,Jonthan said he was a prince and he very loved Ann.He hope Ann can married him.However,Ann should thought that. After 1 years,Ann was married to Jonthan and had a happily life...
Kenneth interested in boating. One afternoon , he boated to far far away from the seaside. When he was thinking about the weather ,there was a terrible shark swam around his boat. 'I bet this shark cant break my boat,if it is, i will have no girl friends,' said handsome Kenneth certainly. Luckly, the terrible shark really bite the boat in pieces.'Oh ,do the shark is the Noch Ness Monster?'Sinking from the pieces of boat, Kenneth tried his bet to float on the sea.But he fainted in a second. Surprisingly, the shark hadnt eaten him, it rescued him quickly from the sea to the seaside. Finally, Kenneth wake up on the seaside, he thought it was an amazing dream. 105 words Cheung Pakho 3E22
Kenneth interested in boating. One afternoon , he boated to far far away from the seaside. When he was thinking about the weather ,there was a terrible shark swam around his boat. 'I bet this shark cant break my boat in pieces,if it is, i will have no girl friends,' said handsome Kenneth certainly. Luckly, the terrible shark really bite the boat in pieces.'Oh .... ,do the shark is the Noch Ness Monster?'Sinking from the pieces of boat, Kenneth tried his best to float on the sea.But he fainted in a second. Surprisingly, the shark hadnt eaten him, it rescued him quickly from the sea to the seaside. Finally, Kenneth wake up on the seaside, he thought it was an amazing dream. 105 words Cheung Pakho 3E22
Mia who lives in a wealthy family was a beautiful girl. Her home was near the forest. When she finished her homework, she would take her dog went to forest to play. One day, her dog was sick. Therefore, she went to the forest to play with alone. Suddenly, she discover that a lion was chased her. She was so terrified. She lost her direction and lost in the forest. She saw a lion about to catch up. Then, her dog jumped on a lion's body and let Mia ran away.Finally......
Mia who lives in a wealthy family was a beautiful girl. Her home was near the forest. When she finished her homework, she would take her dog went to forest to play. One day, her dog was sick. Therefore, she went to the forest to play with alone. Suddenly, she discover that a lion was chased her. She was so terrified. She lost her direction and lost in the forest. She saw a lion about to catch up. Then, her dog jumped on a lion's body and let Mia ran away.Finally...... (74 words) Cherry Lau 3E(8)
One day,Peter and his dog runing on the country park on 6a.m.When 6a.m,no people was in the country park.Suddenly,a robber jumped out! "Give me all your money!"He took out the knife and shouted.After that Peter's dog bit the robber's hand.At last,the robber was caught by Peter. (53 words) Dominic Ma 3E (30)
In Hong Kong,there have a organzition call animals doctors ,there have many dogs,cant,and rabbits .One day, Peter buring his dog to become a pet doctor.After the training the dogs help many elder people to feel better from sick.Peter thought it is glad of his dog that it can help people.
Once upon a time , Richard went to swim himself on the sea. While he was swimming happily, suddently, a big, big wave was shotting up to Richard, Richard was afraid of the wave so he can't move because of the wave look like the shiny teeth. Therefore Richard was rinse by the wave.Oh, that only the dream but poor Richard found he had a bad-wetting. (66 words) Choy Chi On (24)
Once upon a time , Richard went to swim himself on the sea. While he was swimming happily, suddently, a big, big wave was shotting up to Richard, Richard was afraid of the wave so he can't move because of the wave look like the shiny teeth. Therefore Richard was rinse by the wave.Oh, that only the dream but poor Richard found he had a bad-wetting. (66 words) Choy Chi On 3E(24)
One day, Angel went to hiking with her friends, Peter, Paul and Mary. When hiking, Angel saw a white deer was appeared at forest. “What is that?! Wait! “she shouted, than she chased after the white deer. After a hour, she still chasing after the white deer. Suddenly, the deer was look back to her, than the deer has turned to another direction, of cause, Angel also follow the deer. Than after a half an hour, Angel saw her friends was finding her very anxious. So she stopped chasing the deer, and asked them：”What’s going on?” then they tell her, the direction that she had been chased were the path of cliff…… 114 words Vita Leung 3E(12)
One day, Jenny was found swooned in her house. It's sounds normal but it was a interesting place. It is that there was a phone call to the police. According to the police, the call is unusual, there is only a dog barking. Actually, the dog phone to the police to try to save it's owner. Is this story interesting? It's a real case. (63words) Choy Tin Ching, Phoebe 3E04
One day, Jenny was found swooned in her house. It's sounds normal but it was a interesting place. It is that there was a phone call to the police. According to the police, the call is unusual, there is only a dog barking. Actually, the dog phone to the police to try to save it's owner. Is this story interesting? It's a real case. (63words) Choy Tin Ching, Phoebe 3E04
One day,Mary go hiking with her love's dog,Lemon.Lemon is clumsy dog but it like his master much. Suddenly,his master were fall down in river.Lemon tried to help her but was not work.Flash on,Lemon use his long tail to rescue the master and it is work!But the river quite shallow,it is unnecessarily to help Mary...
One day,Mary go hiking with her love's dog,Lemon.Lemon is clumsy dog but it like his master much. Suddenly,his master were fall down in river.Lemon tried to help her but was not work.Flash on,Lemon use his long tail to rescue the master and it is work!But the river quite shallow,it is unnecessarily to help Mary... (63 words) 3E(10)Christine Leong
One day, when Kenny was hiking, he saw a pack of monkeys! Some monkeys wanted to grabbed his foods. Then, he screamed loudly. He ran to the stream. The monkeys were pursued him! Suddenly, a hippo came ashore. It shouted to the monkeys. After that, the monkeys were backed to their forest. Finally, Kenny loved the hippo and called it "Eva". They lived together and got married. (67words) Charles Tsui 3E(32)
Mio chan Once upon a time there was a hamesome boy called Mio. One day while he was shopping at City Super,he noticed a dog ran towards him a was bitting his watch! When he looked closer,he found that watch was a girl's!As there was a name on there.Luckly,behind him was a girl,and when she saw the watch,she shouted'Oh!My God!It's mine!' Andthen they live happily forever. The end 69 words
One day, Joe went to a forest himself. He didn't tell anyone that he went to the forest. He got lost in the forest. Suddently, a lion came out and snarled to Joe. Frightened by a lion, Joe ran far away. 'What a dangerous forest!' said Joe.'If I had known this forest was dangerous, I would not have come there!' Then, he tried to find a way to go home. After a few hours, he still in the forest.'How can I go home? I don't have any thing to direct me to get away form here.' Suddently, Joe heard a sound. It liked lion snarledin far away. Joe thought that if the lion knew where he was. Joe tried to run away before evening but he failed. He chose a place and picthed a shelter to sleep. However he was frightened that if the lion would come to eat him. So, he didn't sleep whole night. The next day, Joe continued to find tha way to go home. He couldn't get away as the forest was so big. Suddently, a lion came uot again. It snarled. Joe was frightened so he couldn't move anymore. The lion walked toward Joe. It walk steped by steped, It was slowly. Joe clsoed his eyes. He didn't want to see which part the lion eat first. The lion came to Joe. But it didn't eat Joe. It gave an instruction to Joe that told him to ride on it. Finally, the lion helped Joe to get away from the forest. Joe was touched. He was so sorry that he thought the lion would eat him. However, the lion didn't blame Joe. Then Joe went home happily with a picture that was the lion. (289WORDS) Yuen Ka Ming 3E (36)
One day, when Peter brought his dog went to the countryside. When he went to the river, he was playing in the river. Suddenly, he pulled out a tendon, he said ‘help me!’ but nobody in here. Abruptly, his dog ran into the river, helped him came back to the land. His dog helped him to save the life. He was grateful to his dog. (65 words) Ben Wong F.3E(34)
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One day, when Peter went to the forest, he was attacked by the lion. He was got aggravated assault. He cried, he shouted, but no one responsed. Fortunately, one of the pig was arrived there. So finally, Peter was treveled the pig to go back home. He got rescue!
(49words)
Lee Yeuk Pan, Joe 3E(28)
John was swimming in the sea on sunday.He was learning how the swim.However,he had no power,so he was drowning.A dolphin was swam to him.I carried him on back and swam to shore.People saw this situation,they called police and rescue John.Finally,the dolphin swam away.
(53words)
Tang Lai Hang 3E(16)
Elena had a very wonderful family. Her parents were not strict with her. She felt happy all the time until that accident happened. One day, Elena was sick. She got a big fever. The fever lasted for a month. When Elena recovered, she found out that she can’t see anything. The doctor said that was because the fever lasted too long, it cost her blind. Elena was very unhappy and frustrated. She felt there was no reason for her to stay in the world. She wanted to suicide. Fortunately, her parents stopped her. Elena’s parents bought her a guide dog. Elena didn’t like the dog at first. But finally they became friends and treated each other friendly. Elena also gave the dog a name called sweetie because she thought sweetie was so important and sweet to her.
Amanda Ng F.3E (14)
Elena had a very wonderful family. Her parents were not strict with her. She felt happy all the time until that accident happened. One day, Elena was sick. She got a big fever. The fever lasted for a month. When Elena recovered, she found out that she can’t see anything. The doctor said that was because the fever lasted too long, it cost her blind. Elena was very unhappy and frustrated. She felt there was no reason for her to stay in the world. She wanted to suicide. Fortunately, her parents stopped her. Elena’s parents bought her a guide dog. Elena didn’t like the dog at first. But finally they became friends and treated each other friendly. Elena also gave the dog a name called sweetie because she thought sweetie was so important and sweet to her.
(137 words)
Amanda Ng F.3E (14)
Ivan was left behind at the desert island. He could not find any food in the island so he just could fish in the sea. When he was fishing, there was a bird hovering in the sky, it saw everything Ivan did. The clever bird knew that Ivan wanted to survive so it wanted to help him. The bird found some food in the woods on the island then brought them to Ivan. In the meantime, Ivan had a rest at the beach nearby. The bird stood in front of Ivan and put the food down, signaled that the food was for him. He felt surprise but also helpless. The food which was brought by the bird was worms.
(106 words)
Hazel Wan 3E (18)
One day, Jon walked alone the forest.
His house was behind the forest. Suddenly, a group of wolves were appeared. Jon was ran away, but the wolves were very fast. When he was attacked by the wolves. Fortunate, the king of the forest 'King Kong' came to rescue Jon. Why the King Kong would protect human? Becuase Jon was King Kong's friend.
62words
Alvin Hong 3E(26)
Once upon a time,had a beautiful girl who lived in castle.Her name called Ann.She was felt very bored in castle.Therefore, she was ran out from the castle.
When she walked along in the street,Ann met a boy.He was so handsome and called Jonthan.He asked Ann'What your name?'Ann said'My name is Ann.''What? you call end?'Jonthan said.'No,is A..n..n,Ann!'she said.'Oh,sorry.'Jonthan said.Then,they made a good friend.They every day would went out to shopping and painic,were very happy.
One day,when they had lunch,Jonthan said he was a prince and he very loved Ann.He hope Ann can married him.However,Ann should thought that.
After 1 years,Ann was married to Jonthan and had a happily life...
(137 words)
Lily Kwong 3E(6)
Handsome Kenneth and pieces of boat
Kenneth interested in boating. One afternoon , he boated to far far away from the seaside. When he was thinking about the weather ,there was a terrible shark swam around his boat.
'I bet this shark cant break my boat,if it is, i will have no girl friends,' said handsome Kenneth certainly.
Luckly, the terrible shark really bite the boat in pieces.'Oh ,do the shark is the Noch Ness Monster?'Sinking from the pieces of boat, Kenneth tried his bet to float on the sea.But he fainted in a second.
Surprisingly, the shark hadnt eaten him, it rescued him quickly from the sea to the seaside.
Finally, Kenneth wake up on the seaside, he thought it was an amazing dream.
105 words
Cheung Pakho 3E22
Handsome Kenneth and pieces of boat
Kenneth interested in boating. One afternoon , he boated to far far away from the seaside. When he was thinking about the weather ,there was a terrible shark swam around his boat.
'I bet this shark cant break my boat in pieces,if it is, i will have no girl friends,' said handsome Kenneth certainly.
Luckly, the terrible shark really bite the boat in pieces.'Oh .... ,do the shark is the Noch Ness Monster?'Sinking from the pieces of boat, Kenneth tried his best to float on the sea.But he fainted in a second.
Surprisingly, the shark hadnt eaten him, it rescued him quickly from the sea to the seaside.
Finally, Kenneth wake up on the seaside, he thought it was an amazing dream.
105 words
Cheung Pakho 3E22
Mia who lives in a wealthy family was a beautiful girl. Her home was near the forest. When she finished her homework, she would take her dog went to forest to play. One day, her dog was sick. Therefore, she went to the forest to play with alone.
Suddenly, she discover that a lion was chased her. She was so terrified. She lost her direction and lost in the forest. She saw a lion about to catch up. Then, her dog jumped on a lion's body and let Mia ran away.Finally......
Mia who lives in a wealthy family was a beautiful girl. Her home was near the forest. When she finished her homework, she would take her dog went to forest to play. One day, her dog was sick. Therefore, she went to the forest to play with alone.
Suddenly, she discover that a lion was chased her. She was so terrified. She lost her direction and lost in the forest. She saw a lion about to catch up. Then, her dog jumped on a lion's body and let Mia ran away.Finally......
(74 words)
Cherry Lau 3E(8)
One day,Peter and his dog runing on the country park on 6a.m.When 6a.m,no people was in the country park.Suddenly,a robber jumped out!
"Give me all your money!"He took out the knife and shouted.After that Peter's dog bit the robber's hand.At last,the robber was caught by Peter.
(53 words)
Dominic Ma
3E (30)
In Hong Kong,there have a organzition call animals doctors ,there have many dogs,cant,and rabbits .One day, Peter buring his dog to become a pet doctor.After the training the dogs help many elder people to feel better from sick.Peter thought it is glad of his dog that it can help people.
3E02
Once upon a time , Richard went to swim himself on the sea. While he was swimming happily, suddently, a big, big wave was shotting up to Richard, Richard was afraid of the wave so he can't move because of the wave look like the shiny teeth. Therefore Richard was rinse by the wave.Oh, that only the dream but poor Richard found he had a bad-wetting.
(66 words)
Choy Chi On (24)
Once upon a time , Richard went to swim himself on the sea. While he was swimming happily, suddently, a big, big wave was shotting up to Richard, Richard was afraid of the wave so he can't move because of the wave look like the shiny teeth. Therefore Richard was rinse by the wave.Oh, that only the dream but poor Richard found he had a bad-wetting.
(66 words)
Choy Chi On
3E(24)
One day, Angel went to hiking with her friends, Peter, Paul and Mary. When hiking, Angel saw a white deer was appeared at forest. “What is that?! Wait! “she shouted, than she chased after the white deer. After a hour, she still chasing after the white deer. Suddenly, the deer was look back to her, than the deer has turned to another direction, of cause, Angel also follow the deer. Than after a half an hour, Angel saw her friends was finding her very anxious. So she stopped chasing the deer, and asked them：”What’s going on?” then they tell her, the direction that she had been chased were the path of cliff……
114 words
Vita Leung 3E(12)
An interesting story about animals helping people
One day, Jenny was found swooned in her house. It's sounds normal but it was a interesting place. It is that there was a phone call to the police. According to the police, the call is unusual, there is only a dog barking.
Actually, the dog phone to the police to try to save it's owner.
Is this story interesting? It's a real case.
(63words)
Choy Tin Ching, Phoebe 3E04
An interesting story about animals helping people
One day, Jenny was found swooned in her house. It's sounds normal but it was a interesting place. It is that there was a phone call to the police. According to the police, the call is unusual, there is only a dog barking.
Actually, the dog phone to the police to try to save it's owner.
Is this story interesting? It's a real case.
(63words)
Choy Tin Ching, Phoebe 3E04
One day,Mary go hiking with her love's dog,Lemon.Lemon is clumsy dog but it like his master much.
Suddenly,his master were fall down in river.Lemon tried to help her but was not work.Flash on,Lemon use his long tail to rescue the master and it is work!But the river quite shallow,it is unnecessarily to help Mary...
One day,Mary go hiking with her love's dog,Lemon.Lemon is clumsy dog but it like his master much.
Suddenly,his master were fall down in river.Lemon tried to help her but was not work.Flash on,Lemon use his long tail to rescue the master and it is work!But the river quite shallow,it is unnecessarily to help Mary...
(63 words)
3E(10)Christine Leong
One day, when Kenny was hiking, he saw a pack of monkeys! Some monkeys wanted to grabbed his foods. Then, he screamed loudly. He ran to the stream. The monkeys were pursued him! Suddenly, a hippo came ashore. It shouted to the monkeys. After that, the monkeys were backed to their forest. Finally, Kenny loved the hippo and called it "Eva". They lived together and got married.
(67words)
Charles Tsui 3E(32)
Mio chan
Once upon a time there was a hamesome boy called Mio.
One day while he was shopping at City Super,he noticed a dog ran towards him a was bitting his watch!
When he looked closer,he found that watch was a girl's!As there was a name on there.Luckly,behind him was a girl,and when she saw the watch,she shouted'Oh!My God!It's mine!'
Andthen they live happily forever.
The end
69 words
One day, Joe went to a forest himself. He didn't tell anyone that he went to the forest. He got lost in the forest. Suddently, a lion came out and snarled to Joe. Frightened by a lion, Joe ran far away.
'What a dangerous forest!' said Joe.'If I had known this forest was dangerous, I would not have come there!' Then, he tried to find a way to go home. After a few hours, he still in the forest.'How can I go home? I don't have any thing to direct me to get away form here.'
Suddently, Joe heard a sound. It liked lion snarledin far away. Joe thought that if the lion knew where he was. Joe tried to run away before evening but he failed. He chose a place and picthed a shelter to sleep. However he was frightened that if the lion would come to eat him. So, he didn't sleep whole night.
The next day, Joe continued to find tha way to go home. He couldn't get away as the forest was so big. Suddently, a lion came uot again. It snarled. Joe was frightened so he couldn't move anymore. The lion walked toward Joe. It walk steped by steped, It was slowly. Joe clsoed his eyes. He didn't want to see which part the lion eat first. The lion came to Joe. But it didn't eat Joe. It gave an instruction to Joe that told him to ride on it.
Finally, the lion helped Joe to get away from the forest. Joe was touched. He was so sorry that he thought the lion would eat him. However, the lion didn't blame Joe. Then Joe went home happily with a picture that was the lion.
(289WORDS)
Yuen Ka Ming 3E (36)
One day, when Peter brought his dog went to the countryside. When he went to the river, he was playing in the river. Suddenly, he pulled out a tendon, he said ‘help me!’ but nobody in here. Abruptly, his dog ran into the river, helped him came back to the land. His dog helped him to save the life. He was grateful to his dog. (65 words)
Ben Wong F.3E(34)
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